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      「BEC寫作」解析這封郵件有何不妥之處
      
            
      
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      「BEC寫作」解析這封郵件有何不妥之處
      
	【BEC寫作】解析這封郵件有何不妥之處
      

      
	 
      


      
	首先看一看這篇郵件請找出其中的問題，然后試著改一改呢~
      

      
	 
      「BEC寫作」解析這封郵件有何不妥之處
      

      
	
      
		
			
      
				
					
      
						From: Henry.Lim@presto.co.my
      
					
      
						Date: 25:7:1-16:06:29
      
					
      
						To: shirley@shirleytaylortraining.com
      
					
      
						CC:
      
					
      
						Subject: HELLO!!!
      
					
      
						 
      
					
      
						hi Shirley
      
					
      
						Hope things r well with u, its good 2 know that u will be back in malaysia again in nov to hold your seminar on effective biz writing. PLS LET ME HAVE SOME FREE DATE while u r over here. Some bookstores r interested in a talk cum singing event. I hope u will agree to take part.
      
					
      
						tnks & rgs
      
					
      
						Harry
      
				      		
			
      
		      
	
      
	
      
		 
      
	
	
      
		下面，試著指出其中的問題并改寫~
      
	
      
		 
      
	
      
		
			
      
				
					
      
						Subject: HELLO[a1] !!!
      
					 
					
      
						 hi [a2] Shirley
      
					 
					
      
						 Hope things r [a3] well with u, its [a4] good 2 know that u will be back in malaysia again in nov [a5] to hold your seminar on effective biz writing. PLS [a6] LET ME HAVE SOME FREE DATE while u r over here. Some bookstores r interested in a talk cum [a7] singing [a8] event. I hope u will agree to take part.
      
					 
					
      
						 tnks [a9] & rgs
      
					 
					
      
						Harry
      
				      		
			
      
		      
	
      
	
      
		
      
			
      
				 [a1]主題盡量用5個左右的詞來總結寫信的目的，要求的行動之類的內(nèi)容。不要用沒有意義的詞，也不要全大寫，更不要使用過多標點。
      
			
      
				 [a2]一定注意開頭大寫。此外，專有詞語的大寫也要注意，如國家名。
      
			
      
				 [a3]可以用于短信，商務類郵件不應使用。一般性詞匯請勿縮寫或簡寫。除非是雙方已知的專有名詞。
      
			
      
				 [a4]Its 和it is 是有區(qū)別的。 [a5]如果不是指日期，最好不要縮寫。
      
			
      
				 [a6]用很多大寫有一種大喊大叫之感，木有禮貌。 [a7]Cum 連詞，意指“和、及”
      
			
      
				 [a8]寫錯。應是signing。  [a9]Thanks and regards
      
			
      
				
					
      
						
							
      
								Subject: Free Date in Malaysia
      
							
      
								Hi Shirley
      
							
      
								Hope things are well with you, it’s good to know that you will be back in Malaysia again in November to hold your seminar on Effective Business Writing. Please let me have some free date while you are over here.
      
							
      
								By the way, some bookstores are interested in a talk and signing event. I hope you will agree to take part.
      
							
      
								Thanks and regards
      
								Harry
      
						      		
					
      
				      
			
      
			
      
				 
      
			

      
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	來看看Shirley的改寫
      

      
	 
      

      
	
      
		
			
      
				
					
      
						Subject: Book signing in Malaysia
      
					
      
						(注：標題需要依據(jù)的Smart 原則——Specific 具體/Meaningful 有意義/Appropriate 恰當/Relevant 相關Thoughtful 體貼周到)
      
					
      
						Hi Shirley/Hello Shirley
      
					
      
						
      
						I hope things are well with you.
      
					
      
						I was pleased to hear that you will be back in Malaysia again in November to hold your seminar on Effective Business Writing.
      
					
      
						Some bookstores are interested in asking you to do a talk and signing event. I hope you will agree to take part.
      
					
      
						Please let me have some free dates while you are over here. And I will make all the arrangements.
      
					
      
						 
      
					
      
						See you soon.(注：使用恰當?shù)慕Y束語Complimentary close；regards指“致以問候”，稍顯乏味)
      
					
      
						Harry                                                                                                                               
      
				      		
			
      
		      
	
      
	

      
	
      
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